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theres a lil too much going on
render doesn't seem to fit in color wise, try b&w
maybe cut down on some fx they look great
but theres a lil too much, kiu :D
ok, ill do that.
that looks good
try and keep the c4ds as your effects ontopa/to the side/or behind the render,you dont want them as a BG,you can use stocks for that,or just a plain color or gradient map would work just fine,but try and keep the c4d visibility to a minimum,only showing part to give a ''spice up'' the your focal.
yeh, what CJ said.
use the C4D to bring out your focal, not bury it.
try no centering the render.
..Sorry But Font Sucks..