Socom FTB2 and Killzone 2

I did another one with two focal points. Let me know what you think.
http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/6400/sladenoctis.jpg

PSD:
http://www.sendspace.com/file/2gf33v

I think the scan lines are a bit strong. But i like it.

yup,scan lines way to heavy

forget the scan lines..just get rid of em

scan lines are way over done
text placement needs help and so does the text choice
im not liking the idea of multiple focals

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Originally Posted by wopps93

scan lines are way over done
text placement needs help and so does the text choice
im not liking the idea of multiple focals

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I had no choice on two focals. He wanted to have it based on two games, so I had to do it that way. The only thing that matters is that he liked it.