Socom Rap

This is a second version of the Socom Freestyle found here. It was first heard in the Console Discussions third podcast, where I provided it as a little Easter Egg.

I have released it under the Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0.

Under this license you are free to share my work as long as you do the following:

• You must give credit to me Johnny McKinney.
• You must link back to Console Discussions.
• You do not use this work in your videos.

Under this license you may NOT:

• You may not alter, transform, or build upon this work.
• You may not use this work for commercial purposes.

Keep in mind this is NOT the final version that will hit youtube. This is one of the reasons I am not allowing anyone to use my work in their videos. The final version will have a beat and be a little more organized. This version is basically a draft with no chorus or beat.

and who is actuli gunna make money from it lol

:D :) :P

lol your the superman of socom:cool:

nice johnny

Sweet song! I downlaoded it and everyone at my school says good job and we can't wait for more!

Don't take this as flaming, more like constructive criticism but man that was hot poop right there. You sounded like your typical white kid wanting to be black (wigger) trying to be apart of the rap game. Now for some positives, not all rhymes were horrible and uncreative just most of them and you could have even made the hot poo stink less if you would have thrown a beat in there to spit along with even if it was a rough copy. I'd personally say dump it in the can and do a rewrite and this time flow to a beat but if you want to stick with this there's still tons to be done to freshen up this spit. Again don't take this too seriously its just one mans opinion/suggestions and every other post on this thread seems to on the other side of the fence, just hope your not deleting any of the other quote 'negative' posts about this spit :D Good luck bro.

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Originally Posted by dialtone

Don't take this as flaming, more like constructive criticism but man that was hot poop right there. You sounded like your typical white kid wanting to be black (wigger) trying to be apart of the rap game. Now for some positives, not all rhymes were horrible and uncreative just most of them and you could have even made the hot poo stink less if you would have thrown a beat in there to spit along with even if it was a rough copy. I'd personally say dump it in the can and do a rewrite and this time flow to a beat but if you want to stick with this there's still tons to be done to freshen up this spit. Again don't take this too seriously its just one mans opinion/suggestions and every other post on this thread seems to on the other side of the fence, just hope your not deleting any of the other quote 'negative' posts about this spit :D Good luck bro.

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I liked my first one better:
http://www.consolediscussions.com/fo...estyle-t16708/

Beautiful. Good job ahaha ;)