Osiris Shoes

This was mostly an experimental sig.
v1:
https://www.consolediscussions.com/f...g?t=1258791223

v2:
https://www.consolediscussions.com/f...g?t=1258791251

CnC

you using too much the pen tool and the same font try to work on that but sig loks good

colors dont really flow that well
i would have to go with v1

not bad
bg and text suck tho

V1 looks better. If your going to use the pen tool like that you should at least follow one flow, you have quick curves at the top on a bunch of them but that one near the top laces of the shoes like hurls over and it doesn't follow the rest anymore. Text is ok, and a little bit too much smudge.

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Originally Posted by DineX

you using too much the pen tool and the same font try to work on that but sig loks good

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ok this is the first sig I've used the pen tool in. also I couldnt find a good font.

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Originally Posted by Zeus

V1 looks better. If your going to use the pen tool like that you should at least follow one flow, you have quick curves at the top on a bunch of them but that one near the top laces of the shoes like hurls over and it doesn't follow the rest anymore. Text is ok, and a little bit too much smudge.

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Ok I see what you're saying about the top of the laces.

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Originally Posted by michael.pfrimmer

Ok I see what you're saying about the top of the laces.

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Yeah its all at an angle on the right and then you get to the top there and you make it go straight down and it kind of throws it off a little bit. Follow it next time.

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Originally Posted by Zeus

Yeah its all at an angle on the right and then you get to the top there and you make it go straight down and it kind of throws it off a little bit. Follow it next time.

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yeah that was a pretty amateur mistake.

Looks good...I prefer v1