Thou shal sing - CnC

First piece in sometime now.

https://www.consolediscussions.com/f.../345bwy8-1.jpg

CnC

I don't like the "Thou shal" coloring. It just seems messy. I like the signature.

also "shall" has two L's

It was meant to look bad lol. But wanna give me some CnC on this before I enter it for a competition at AIO?
http://tinypic.com/r/i569nn/6
http://tinypic.com/r/i569nn/6