Flower In Bloom LP

I like these alot they are awesome IMO best lp i have done :D and its my first time topazing something :D
Please tell me what to improve on fix etc thanks
and the first ones text was kinda experimental but i liked how it looked on that one so i stuck with it :D

https://www.consolediscussions.com/f...loompedo-1.png<different text not topazed as much

https://www.consolediscussions.com/f...oomtopaz-1.png<topazed alot more

https://www.consolediscussions.com/f...inbloom2-1.png<Regular sharpen

C&C is greatly appreciated :D

I like the third one it's just the text that bothers me about all of it. 9/10

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Originally Posted by hell-

I like the third one it's just the text that bothers me about all of it. 9/10

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thanks for the comments man :D
and what text would you recommend for this??

shit one of them go to my background

If I recommended one it still wouldn't go with this I use plain text on everything I make. You probably have to expierment to see wich one is a best fit.

@hell ok man :D thanks for the advice anyways :D

and @thefasman22 do you want me to make on with out my name on it for your background?? idk if you want my name there....and thanks

Work on the background. I can see the edges of the so you used. Use the Eraser to make it blend more.

pretty good
i like the 3rd overall,
kiu

first off....fk topaz...its for noobs
second......WOOOOOOTT this is some hawt shit bro
finally i've found someone that i can make some lp's with
great job. keep it up, and fk topaz vivacity
(btw, text is crap)

I think its sexy.
good job.

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Originally Posted by CoDeX

Work on the background. I can see the edges of the so you used. Use the Eraser to make it blend more.

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ok thanks for the advice

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Originally Posted by xFrAgZx

pretty good
i like the 3rd overall,
kiu

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thanks man

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Originally Posted by DGK-

first off....fk topaz...its for noobs
second......WOOOOOOTT this is some hawt shit bro
finally i've found someone that i can make some lp's with
great job. keep it up, and fk topaz vivacity
(btw, text is crap)

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lol yes text is horrible i have gotton quite a few comments on other sites about how the text looks almost like 16 bit coloring from the 70's or 80's lol
and thanks man :D

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Originally Posted by gokickadogx2

I think its sexy.
good job.

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thanks :D

WoW this is very nice.
I was just looking at your Retro one it's also very good but this one is amazing.
I can't stop staring at it

imo,the second on is just plain beatuiful

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Originally Posted by 51L3NT_PA1N_

WoW this is very nice.
I was just looking at your Retro one it's also very good but this one is amazing.
I can't stop staring at it

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Wow thanks alot man :D i worked alot on it :D

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Originally Posted by Commander_John.

imo,the second on is just plain beatuiful

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Thanks man :D