My First Grunge.......

Ok, i hope you guys like it....its my first grunge so here it is....
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http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/309...getestcopy.jpg

bring out your focal more, its a lil too blended in the bg
work on txt and the border, kiu :D

Try not making it monotone (one color)
make it a bit smaller and add your borders on the edge.
the render placement os good, KIU