SaSuKe

[Horizontal]

~SaSuKe sTyLE~

[XzZombiexX]

You're gonna need alot of work
And I know that sounds pretty vague, but the things to work on are plentiful.
All I can say is try reading/watching some tutorials.
Make sure you get the basics down before you try making something too extreme.
If your using Photoshop or any other design program, familiarize yourself with the different tools and settings that are available to you

[MDL]

yeah keep going and it doesn't look too bad just too basic

[Blue]

blending depth flow text all need work,try not lower opacity on c4ds,it usually looks like crap,your render needs blending,your bg is way too basic