- Wolverine Origins -

**CoDeX** · 08-19-2010, 12:30 AM

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**PIZDRUMMER** · 08-21-2010, 01:24 PM

Too much smudging going on here. Don't find the focal of the tag. Need some text, light, depth to go on the tag. try using 400x200 for tags. KIU
4/10

**Horizontal** · 08-21-2010, 01:35 PM

niceE smUDge

----Added 21/8/2010 at 12:43 PM----

Originally Posted by PIZDRUMMER

Too much smudging going on here. Don't find the focal of the tag. Need some text, light, depth to go on the tag. try using 400x200 for tags. KIU
4/10

Nigg those cnc looks like they come from DeviAntart:eyeroll:

**Blue** · 08-21-2010, 02:05 PM

Originally Posted by PIZDRUMMER

Too much smudging going on here. Don't find the focal of the tag. Need some text, light, depth to go on the tag. try using 400x200 for tags. KIU
4/10

Too much smudging?its obviously a smudge signature.Some of the best work I've seen is smudge only.And there are no set dimensions for any piece.It looks like he made it bigger so he could fit the entire render.

Any who codex,this is real nice,i like it.I like how it looks sorta like an old painting,idk how else to describe the feel besides that lol.Kiu

**CoDeX** · 08-21-2010, 04:38 PM

That isn't smudge!!!
In fact I didn't even use smudge in this signature.

----Added 21/8/2010 at 10:57 PM----

Originally Posted by PIZDRUMMER

Too much smudging going on here. Don't find the focal of the tag. Need some text, light, depth to go on the tag. try using 400x200 for tags. KIU
4/10

That's cloud brushing.
It's the fucking guy jumping out of the smoke.
Not everything needs text.

Originally Posted by Michelangelo

Well I just got done painting the Sistine Chapel ceiling, but something doesn't feel right. I know! I'll add shitty writing to spice it up!

See that white some in the top right? That's the light source.
The smoke with less detail is farther away. The smoke with more detail is closer.
FUCK YOUR SHITTY CLICHE DIMENSIONS!!!

Originally Posted by Blue

Too much smudging?its obviously a smudge signature.Some of the best work I've seen is smudge only.And there are no set dimensions for any piece.It looks like he made it bigger so he could fit the entire render.

Any who codex,this is real nice,i like it.I like how it looks sorta like an old painting,idk how else to describe the feel besides that lol.Kiu

The signature ended up being 681x292 so I resized it.