I'm using Fruity Loops alot more because I want to get use to it so I can make some raps better with a beat. Anyway this is my first go at a beat. It's 25 bars. I could make it sound better by just removing the toned kick, but it feels empty without it. I'm going to find some replacement sounds.

V1
http://www.archive.org/details/BeatBeginner

V2
http://www.archive.org/details/BeatBeginner2

Edit: Here's the newest version. This is what I learned within two days. I think it's improved a pretty good bit.
http://www.archive.org/details/BeatBeginner3