Quote Originally Posted by Oasis View Post
not bad...
2 things that went wrong here though
* light source was poorly placed
* text
I disagree, the light source is placed well. It makes the focal point up near the top by the head, and therefore in the middle of the image. The text is also pretty good for what he gave himself to work with, but the "dinex" part is too small and the "boy" in cowboy is blended into the background