Quote Originally Posted by Commander_John. View Post
your text should only be in 1 spot,where it wont draw attention away from the eyes of the person.a good place would be right above the pistol.also work with flow and depth.but you are improving,kiu.
ok ill work on doing that and as for the flow I will improve that Its gonna be an easy fix.

Thanks,
Michael P. (rokkerguy)

Quote Originally Posted by Prestige View Post
Your getting soo much better.
For text, try not to get it to distract people from the focal.
And the red and yellow not so good. You want to use colors from the render or C4D.
Other than that, you doing better [:
And the font you used, Visitor -BRK- , you don't want to use those for the big text. Visitor is meant for small text.
I kinda like how the image sticks out but i will definately try blending more colors, and thanks for the font advice.

Thanks,
Michael P. (rokkerguy)